Thursday, December 17, 2009

What I needed to Say v.1

When I sit and sketch
sprawling lines and
morphing people

When I
stare at dancing flames
then draw goldfish

When I
look at my hands all
covered in
ink
oils
chalk

I am alone, you
cannot hear me
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5 comments:

  1. Shelbyyy!December 17, 2009 at 6:21 AM

    Love the simplicity of this. Love the flow.
    Can't think of anything to change. Sorry, I'm unhelpful.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 17, 2009 at 6:23 AM

    i think its amazing the word choice,
    but i get the alone part but, whats the basic meaning?

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  3. Brittany LeshovskyDecember 17, 2009 at 6:32 AM

    What does it mean? like who are you trying to say something to?

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  4. AlexDecember 17, 2009 at 6:35 AM

    I...think I get it. It's like cute but sad at the same time. I like it.

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  5. Kay KayDecember 17, 2009 at 6:53 AM

    I like it. It feels isolated to me. I don't know what you are trying to say to the other person though.

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